my new original

[ethanmansfield]

hi guys im a 16 year old producer from Melbourne i made this song on my laptop with a pair of dj headphones so it is pretty raw but please listen and constructive feedback welcome.

thanks

https://soundcloud.com/ethanmansfieldofficial-1/pressure-original-mix

[legunner]

Some nice ideas. Promising signs as well. But like I say all the time, laptop and dj headphones are no excuse for a track to be 'raw'. Keep at it you have a lot of ptential.

[ethanmansfield]

aha thanks alot man i really appreciate those words , no excuses from now on