SweetIshDub Posted August 10, 2011 Share Posted August 10, 2011 Im trying to get a legit EP going to master and put out for fun. Ive got two tracks in the works so far: Wizard Sticks by SWEETISH The Brodown by SWEETISH Comments? Suggestions? Critiques?Any positive and especially negative feedback would be great I want to make it super official Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
street Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 First track: only thing I didn't like was that intro percussion with the high cut on it. it sounded too off-beat and didn't really gel with the synth work.second track: ummm, the rhythm and progression of the synths just don't seem to work. it reminded me off the riff in black sabbath - iron man, lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SweetIshDub Posted August 11, 2011 Author Share Posted August 11, 2011 yeah I wasnt sure about the drums in the intro since the synth is in 6/8 and the percussions in 4/4, didnt know if the polyrhythm worked or not. its tough when you get so intro a track and hear it so much so im glad to get some feedback on thatand the second one does sound like iron man haha, I didnt do it on purpose honestly, in fact i changed some stuff once I realized it because i was worried it was too similar. The reason Im doing this too is because Ive got a small label down to release some tracks If i come up with a sick enough EP but its kind of whack because now Im all worried about trying to live up to what they want instead of making tracks for fun, kind of a different ballgame Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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