FUCK lol my sound was up pretty high for that first kick. If you want it to be something people would use, make your intro's and outro's way longer for the sake of mixing in/out. Has a good journey (intro, build, drop etc) but the drop is weaker than the intro - I think it's the kicks. They're tighter in the intro. What made you use softer kicks on the main drop and body? Song has good structure overall though, not bad for an early producer. Keep it up!