jerryblam Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 Laneway Romance (Original Mix) by Jerry Blam So I recently tried my hand at something progressive. This is what came out. I'm a bit confused as to what to label it as because I tend to just make things the I want to hear. Anyway, I have contributed and feel accomplished! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaz Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 i liked it man, wicked chill intro, love the drop at 2:41...i feel it needs more of a break down between the middle and the last 3/4...like a chill as break incorporating the intro a bit would be good then a Steady synth build then a huge drop just my thoughts anyways Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerryblam Posted April 5, 2011 Author Share Posted April 5, 2011 Thanks man, I definitely not done with this track, and I admit I had some serious trouble with arrangement. I guess I was just trying to toe the line between being progressive and boring way too much. I should eat less sugar before producing haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pulsebeat Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 loving the beats buddyheaps sick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cupe Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 dope tune. would be good to see it with some more work done to itwould be top notch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerryblam Posted April 5, 2011 Author Share Posted April 5, 2011 Thanks Cupe, any suggestions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cupe Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 none right now, but im multitasking You just said you're not done with the track, so I was keen to see what you wanted to do with it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerryblam Posted April 5, 2011 Author Share Posted April 5, 2011 Cool cool. Yeah I'm not finished with her but I'm a bit stuck. I think it's the old problem of "trying too hard and going no-where". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaz Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 the Beatles took LSD at times like these....no but seriously sometimes you just gotta wait...i get my best idea's at work for some reason Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerryblam Posted April 5, 2011 Author Share Posted April 5, 2011 I feel that. Sitting on the train and having shit just come to you when you are a million miles away from a computer sucks haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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