One bootleg - Unfinished business

[pundaddy]

2nd track i've come up with, still learning the ropes of FL studio, let me know what you think

http://soundcloud.com/plastercast/one-unofficial-remix

[Mitch]

nice one man, your first track was decent, but can hear the improvement in this one

Nice work, keep working on them producing skills man

[AlexJ]

not too bad, i would push a variety of synth material through it however, maybe speed it up slightly as well. feel it would improve with the assistance of some trance tracks mixed in as part of an extended mix.

[LabRat]

you're in the experimental stage so really get into FL and start using EVERYTHING! it's honestly the best way around getting to know your DAW.

with this track (or the next). go nuts and chop up sounds and add drum rolls etc. when you structure a song, you wanna make it breath and have as much space as possible. try adding breaks and fills so the track doesnt drag on doing the same thing until the major break (if you wanna call it that lol). dont be affraid to chop and change your synth, bass and percs

[pundaddy]

Will do, cheers man

[mattus123]

mate for your second track, it sure as shit aint bad

on the drop at 1min (i assume its a drop) add more bass?

either way, solid effort!!! =D

[Bonz]

2nd track man....my word..

ur definitely on the right track.

but yeah like spitfire was saying, maybe a little to many air gaps between synths.

ur gettin it tho man!