I'd say the intro is a bit quiet, could be a bit more busy. I can feel the 'build 'em up..' happening but it's happening too slow for me. Needs more noise, cause the '..tear 'em down' doesn't pack enough punch. I might of made the kicks a bit tighter. This track would work as techno if it were 20 or 30bpm faster. I think it just needs more body. The structure seems good but it doesn't 'feel' like it delivers.