well with all advice. i kept working on this, changed the drums etc. Turned out to be more of a Glitch Hop sounding track i think. dunno. I 'Lerner' lots while making this. things like simplicity and basic structure is better than trying to cram all your ideas into 3 mins. But i didnt want this track to be some lost half finished thing just to end up in the recycle bin next month so here it is. Peach Juice. I left the first version up in OP if anyone has time or care to see any difference or what not. Working on a new track as of this morning. excited i feel http://soundcloud.com/yoursurrogatemother/peach-juice btw, thanks guys. this place has brought out my muse monster again to just have a crack and live & learn