Hey guys, bet you thought id never post something here aye yeah so the deal is ive had this track that i started a while back, and i got to this point and had no idea what else to do with it, this is pretty much my 1st attempt at writing tunes, well 2nd attempt i suppose, the 1st attempt i did was a dubstep track at only 1 other person has listened to before now as embarrassed as i am about this attempted here, i'd really like your help (criticism) on this progress, if its shit, if there is the slightest possibility that it can be an ok track (obviously im not expecting to get signed from this garbage ) whats its lacking, etc, anything you can think of to help me keep goin on it would be greatly appreciated http://soundcloud.com/defkon86/defkon-breaks-attempt