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The beat probably needs to have more oomph

The piano and guitar is pretty sick. Sounds like the credits for resident evil or some shit

What did you record this with?

*edit*

also has a nice hook cause it's ringing in my head after i stopped listening

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Wrote quick to this today, very rough, flows better then it looks. If you send me the beat I'm happy to use it...

This is the story of a young girl, young man

Growing up together, too fast, so much fun had

Then it all changed, one sunday afternoon

The boy had a feeling & didn't know what to do

The love he shared for the girl was something more

Been best friends forever, since about the age of 4

Worried to confess because she means the world

So he keeps it inside & dosent tell the girl

But it kills him because he knows there's something there

Told each other everything, Good times always shared

Then the girl got sick & he didn't know what to do

Came running down her street screaming, girl I love you

HOOK

Through good times & bad, I'll never leave your side

Cause I'm yours girl & I know that your mine

You can make me smile, no matter what

So I gotta tell you baby, I love you a lot

We return and the girl is on her death bed

Not knowing what to do the boy is upset

She can't talk, vocal cords gone, missing

She writes a note. They come together, they're kissing

I'll miss you when I go, a tear down the cheek

On the back of the note, she wrote, I wish I could speak

He goes home to his room, scrummaging for a pen

Finds a pad & a pencil, won't let this be the end

He finds himself a beat, he finds himself some flow

He writes down these words, to let the whole world know

Her passing was too soon, we know she didnt choose it

So he'll let her live on through all of his music

HOOK

Through good times & bad, I'll never leave your side

Cause I'm yours girl & I know that your mine

You can make me smile, no matter what

So I gotta tell you baby, I love you a lot

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